Shae
Shae is a Puppy lover Lion hater 10 year old girl. She is N.Z European. She loves lollies, chocolate and all that stuff. Shae also loves netball. She has a little puppy named Case and man she's a cutie. Shae's got two younger brothers named Kian and Keanu and her parents Rachel and Gareth. Now Shae, I have a pretty weird question for you. Which is would you rather be - deaf or blind and why?Shae said deaf so she can't hear her brothers. Man, Shae for some reason I wish the same thing. Well now you know about Shae. Thanks Shae.
Lots of info and a great start. But use punctuation two spaces after a full stop and capital I s.
ReplyDeleteNice work Macy but check your spelling with Shae because I'm sure Kyan is spelled with a Y not an I. Also I Agree with Lauren two spaces after a full stop.
ReplyDeleteI like the way that at the end you read through it again and put exciting words in it,that makes it very powerful and puts more sense into it.
ReplyDeleteI LOVED IT.
Great article, Macy. I really enjoyed reading it.
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